i'm getting to be a real curmudgeon, but I have abhorred rap since I was introduced to the artl?form in the mid 80s through "rapping basketball". If I step back and ignore my prejudices, I can probably recognize good rap. This wasn't it. There is no cohesion in the lyrics, just somewhat random words presented on the beat. Was there some sort of message?
The lighting would have been improved with some. Was this shot in a cave? There was no contrast between the uniforms and the background, although I could see some yellow lines in a couple of places, as well as some sort of tiled pattern. The images were like a strobe light. May be a cool effect in some context, but I never got a sense of the whole. Does the director / producer have acute attention deficit disorder, or is he just playing to an audience that is not known for having an attention span longer than a half second?